Wednesday 11 November 2009

Starring: A fistful of candies

She was a little girl like any other, happy with her toys, her school, her friends. Every morning she would pass by uncle Abin's shop. He would pull her cheeks and hand her some coloured candies. Her father would scold her for accepting free things, her mother would say it's because she looks like a doll everybody pets her. Sometimes she would get embarrassed and try to return him the candies, but he would thrust it in her hand and say, 'Don't worry, when I need something I'll first come to you'. She would ask, 'Promise?', he would nod and give out a loud laugh.

The year was 1942. Bengal (in India) was hit by one the worst famines ever. The colonial leaders hoarded all the rice that led to thousands of villages dieing out of hunger. The streets would be full of wails of hungry men, women and children. They would sit begging at people's doors for hours. But even the rich didn't have enough to both eat and share. One day she was sleeping in her room when she heard a familiar voice. She went to the window and found uncle Abin there. He looked like a ghost, his face was blue and his eyes were in giant hollows. He outstretched his hand and the word 'food' came out of the deep recesses of his belly. She was about to run into the kitchen when her mother scooped in and shut the window. She said, 'Do you want to give him your father's meal?' and grabbed her away from there.

Today, the little girl is an eighty year old woman. Even now she sometimes wakes up at night hearing a cry for 'food'.

(The woman is my grandmother-in-law and one of the most fascinating characters. Amongst many other things, she has also been an Indian freedom fighter. More than a million people died in the famine in those years.)

5 comments:

  1. ooh MY GOD Polo..... I have tears rolling down from my eyes after reading this. I guess this is what reality is.... Harsh reality!!! u cannot blame her mom but just imagine how miserable the man must have felt at the first place to have come and ask for food and then how much worse when the door was slammed on his face... I can imagine how the story still haunts you grand mom..... she must have felt so miserable in all these years..... hats off to her to remember the man after so many years still... as we see (I have first hand experience) in todays world the first thing ppl do is to backstab the person who trusted and cared for you... She still remembers him proves the fact that she is still thankful for the love he had given to the young girl...give my love and regards to your grandmom.... thanks a lot Polo for sharing the stories with us .. you are absolutely right.. truth is indeed stranger than fiction....(got extremely emotional and made the comment real long)

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  2. Screenplays for life...well done :)

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  3. So well written..i hope the fascinating lady knows about it..

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  4. you put the kernel of the story there. many stories, though seemingly different, share the same kernel. what makes them different, hence unique, and hence interesting, is the flesh that the writer grows around that kernel. your kernels, both of them, have moving human insight no doubt, but lack the little details, the voice of a writer. i might be talking humbug here, its for you to decide. but since you asked me to comment, i'd say spend some more time with these stories inside your head and give them form. it's what'll make me come back to your blog to read more. :)

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  5. hey dev...thank u for ur comment. constructive criticism is always helpful. i understand where u r coming from considering u r a screenwriter. n i've definitely given more than a once-over to ur comment n introspected the project. i think, it has that passive what-u-make-of-it kinda tone because i was coming from a different place. I didn't set out to create stories...but a store! i used to write scraps of things i find interesting in diaries n one day i decided to dignify them with a blog. so they are more of scattered observations n glimpses i casually write down at the end of a good day. i don't know whether i've the talent to make these into something...but someday i'll try to n that'll be a bigger project. i just wanted to tell u where i'm coming from n i've clarified that in my intro too now. but i've to say, i've gained from ur feedback n i'm bearing what u said about form in mind, coz i would want u to come back n read more.

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